Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Tuesday, May 12, 2015


The Outsiders

  The nurse come comes in the room and said ”Johnny your mother is here to see you.” Johnny said “I do not want to see my mom.” The nurse kicked out Two-Bit, Ponyboy, Dally, and Soda and then let Johnnys mother in any way. When Johnny saw his mom walk in the room Johnny started yelling as loud as he could at her and when  he chilled and stopped yelling he past out from yelling to much. Then the nurse ran in the room and kicked Johnnys mother out of the room and rushed to get the doctor and to help Johnny.
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