Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Thursday, May 21, 2015

A nurse came into the room and said your mother is here to see you. Johnny eye got big and dark he like I don’t want to see her he was thinking to his self she was problem going to say how much trouble he been causing. So when the nurse said she could come in they were talking about   how if he was ok and how  thing were going with him and if he has been taking care of his self and then he was thinking of everything that he had done and regretting it all and when she came in he was so mad he didn't even look at her and he try to hit her in he hit her in her face she started bleeding and she started crying and after words he felt bad for what he had just cause then he was yelling at her but before she left he had fell and hurt his self and his mom try helping him but he did not want his help then she said I love you Johnny he was like get out of my room then she finale left and a few hours he started getting worst couldn't breathe by his self so then later on he could breathe by his self with all of his support that he had when he was up there then he final got to go home with people that cared about him      

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