Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Tuesday, May 12, 2015

                                        As the nurse turns to let Johnny's mother into the room Johnny eyes wide and he turns whiter then before ." what are you doing here?" Johnny said." I wanted to see how bad you were," His mother said." I don't want you here. LEAVE ME ALONE!!!" Johnny yelled.                         
                                  " But she's your mother Johnny she came to se you at least "  I said." Shut up Pony boy, you don't understand." He said. He was right I didn't understand why he could hate his mother so much. At least she came to see him. I was snapped out of my thoughts by yelling
                                    "You don't love me your a liar I don't want you here I never want to see you again LEAVE!!!. Johnny screamed Johnny let out a high pitch scream and fell forward. The nurse came running in yelling at us get out or their. Doctors and nurses cam running in as we were leaving and his mother was on the phone was crying.
                                    " Its not fair he hates us." She said on the phone. He said he never wants to see me again "She cried on  " That horrible mental messed up child all that we've done for him  ' She said as she hung up the phone. Now I don't know what exactly happened but I think the stress and yelling was to much for Johnny and he couldn't handle it. He should be fine hopefully is what the doctors said. Now I kind of understand why he can hate her so much.     

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