Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Thursday, May 21, 2015

Johnny was laying it the bed in the hospital and the nurse came into the room and said, Johnny your mom is here, he said I don't want to see her, the nurse said its your mother. then he got made and jumped out he window onto a canapé and ran away. And they never saw him again
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