Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Thursday, May 28, 2015


A nurse came in said your mother is here to see you. My eyes got big I was so surprised I said "let her in" the nurse said "ok I’ll be right back". My mom came in the room and she was just standing there looking at me then she said "are you okay" I said "I guess so thanks what do u want" she said" I wanted to know what where you thinking u could have got killed". I was so confused it's not like she cared anyways. "why do u care", "I just wanted to know you where okay and to apologize for what I put you through. "why all of a sudden u care why didn't you care for me at first" I was just so mad I didn't even want to see her." I'm so mad at you right now I don't even want to talk to you" "I'm so sorry baby I just wanted to know that u where okay I know I haven't been a good mother and I'm sorry for that but I'm here now". "NO I don't want to talk to you anymore get out" but.. "NOW" his mom leave the room in tell the nurse to take good care of her son in she leaves the hospital . I was just siting there thinking should I have done that.

 

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