Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Tuesday, May 12, 2015


 

      As soon as the nurse let Johnny's mom in the room there was nothing but silence. Johnny looked so shocked. His face was pale and his mouth was in the shape of an o. His mom walked over and stood at the side of the bed. “How are you feeling” she asked. Knowing she didn’t really care he answered "not good."

“I have one question for you Johnny, WHAT WERE YOU THINKING!" and with that being said she flew into a violent rage. All Johnny could think is I wish I wasn’t here I wish I wasn’t. “You stupid juvenile delinquent," she yelled. Then security came into the room. They escorted her out of the hospital. She was never allowed back in there again. Later that afternoon Ponyboy came back to see Johnny. He was sad about what had happened earlier. Ponyboy comforted him then went home.

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