Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Tuesday, May 12, 2015


He would probably freak out if she was there because he haven’t seen her in a long time. She would be sad because her son is  all beat up.
 She would be in tears because she shouldn’t know what to do. But  that her son she should get him when he is fixed and take good care of him so he can be a better person and won’t be scared of anyone.
 So he can have confidence and be more manly, and also have a life and have kids so he can teach them some stuff that they should know.
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