Assignment

Your Task: Rewrite the hospital scene where Johnny's mother comes to visit. In your version, the nurse does not turn her away, but lets her in the room. Imagine Johnny's reaction. What would Johnny's mother say to him? What would Johnny say to her?

You are writing part of a narrative, not a script. Sentences, punctuation, and paragraphs should appear the way it would in a book. Use the book or passage above as an example. Pay special attention to the dialogue and how the author starts a new paragraph each time she changes speakers.

Thursday, May 21, 2015

Mona Elniel


 

Johnny’s mom came to the hospital and walked down to Johnny’s room. The nurse came rushing out and almost knocked her down and told her “ ma’am you can’t come in at this moment “ then the nurse left . When Johnny’s mom seen no sign of the nurse she hurry up and went into Johnny’s room .  Johnny was just waking up from his black out when he seen his mom and gasped. “ What are you doing here I ? I thought I told the nurse that I didn’t want to see no sign of you “ ” I know ” said his mom but we need to talk . Talk about what said Johnny ? There’s nothing to about, I don’t like you! And then the nurse walks in .

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